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 [//]: # Is this worded too harshly? This is meant for non-vegans. We're not writing an expo for other vegans to read. Hmmm...
 
-When a society becomes morally sick, it takes the healthy to bring the ill back into good conscience. It should not be required to explain that other animals have complex {{thoughts, emotions}} and are deserving of our love and care. The lie that we are required to consume their flesh has made us accept that "it's a necessary evil" when in reality it is not only necessary but detrimental to our physical well-being and karma.
+When a society becomes morally sick, it takes the healthy to bring the ill back into good conscience. It should not be required to explain that other beings have complex {{thoughts, emotions}} and are deserving of our love and care. {{ something about our young ones and how they are affected, like maybe "Our children deserve to be nurtured and are seeing {{rampant abuse?? where am I going here???}}" }}
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+{{something about how it relates to eating non-humans}}. The lie that we are required to consume their flesh has made us accept that "it's a necessary evil" when in reality it is not only necessary but detrimental to our physical well-being and karma.
 
 # Why Consider Veganism? -- It Benefits All Of Us!