From 173a40a4a0c4867e396243f041504744a18ac590 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Hyperling Date: Sun, 12 Jul 2026 13:33:52 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Alter the intro's wording and add some ideas. --- ebook.md | 4 +++- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/ebook.md b/ebook.md index 68f88f3..228813d 100755 --- a/ebook.md +++ b/ebook.md @@ -46,7 +46,9 @@ keywords: [//]: # Is this worded too harshly? This is meant for non-vegans. We're not writing an expo for other vegans to read. Hmmm... -When a society becomes morally sick, it takes the healthy to bring the ill back into good conscience. It should not be required to explain that other animals have complex {{thoughts, emotions}} and are deserving of our love and care. The lie that we are required to consume their flesh has made us accept that "it's a necessary evil" when in reality it is not only necessary but detrimental to our physical well-being and karma. +When a society becomes morally sick, it takes the healthy to bring the ill back into good conscience. It should not be required to explain that other beings have complex {{thoughts, emotions}} and are deserving of our love and care. {{ something about our young ones and how they are affected, like maybe "Our children deserve to be nurtured and are seeing {{rampant abuse?? where am I going here???}}" }} + +{{something about how it relates to eating non-humans}}. The lie that we are required to consume their flesh has made us accept that "it's a necessary evil" when in reality it is not only necessary but detrimental to our physical well-being and karma. # Why Consider Veganism? -- It Benefits All Of Us!