Reword some of this section and maybe removing the how to switch section in place for online guides.

content00-intro.md

@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@
 
 ## Privacy vs Security
 
-There is a distinct difference between two methods of hardening (making more protected) a device. One focuses more on keeping your metadata safe, and the other your data. Many [TBD/TODO: solutions?] handle both at the same time, such as using a VPN.
+There is a distinct difference between two methods of hardening a device. One focuses more on keeping your metadata safe, and the other protects your data. Many solutions handle both at the same time, such as using a VPN.
 
 `Privacy` is the first; it means that you would like to prevent others from seeing what you are doing, keeping others' **eyes** off your data. You would like your web browsing experience to be *confidential*. `Privacy` involves using browsers which delete sensitive data, messengers which use `end-to-end encryption` (`E2EE`), etc.
 
-`Security` is the latter; ensuring that your device and its content are not accessible from others. This is more related to keeping others' **hands** off your data. Having proper `security `prevents your devices from being hacked and your online accounts from being breached. This would be more related to using a `passcode` on your device, having strong passwords, and [TBD/TODO].
+`Security` is the latter; ensuring that your device and its content are not accessible to others. This is more related to keeping others' **hands** off your data. Having proper `security` prevents your devices from being hacked and your online accounts from being breached. This would be more related to using a `passcode` on your device, having strong `passwords`, and `encrypting` any storage devices.

content05-email.md

@@ -18,12 +18,12 @@ This article from 2015 lists two of the same hosts that I'd recommend, showing t
 
 ### Proton
 
-A highly popular choice in today's world. When emailing other Proton users the messages are E2EE, meaning that even Proton cannot read the contents.
+A highly popular choice in today's world. When emailing other Proton users the messages are E2EE, meaning that even Proton cannot read the contents [TBD: source?].
 
 The service must be used from their website or app, they do not provide IMAP/SMTP to the general public. Their interface is actually pretty good though, and using it means less setup in the long run.
 
 They also offer enterprise email hosting solutions if you have your own domain.
-If only set up for yourself it's actually quite affordable, starting around $60 USD in 2025.
+If only set up for yourself it's actually quite affordable, starting around $60 USD per year in 2025.
 
 Other than email, Proton offers a respectable VPN, a 2 factor authenticator (2FA), a password manager, and many other solutions that people tend to look for.
 
@@ -35,6 +35,8 @@ Other than email, Proton offers a respectable VPN, a 2 factor authenticator (2FA
 
 ### Riseup
 
+[TBD]
+
 ## Mail Forwarding
 
 Below are links on how to set up mail forwarding in common service providers.
@@ -43,25 +45,27 @@ Proton provides an explanation with easy to follow instructions when migrating f
 
 [Switching : `proton.me/easyswitch`](https://proton.me/easyswitch)
 
-### Google: @gmail.com
+[//] : # Does all this stuff below really need to be in this zine??? Seems way too thorough.
-
+[//] : #
-[TBD/TODO]
+[//] : # ### Google: @gmail.com
-
+[//] : #
-### Yahoo: @yahoo.com, @myyahoo.com, @ymail.com, @yahoo.*
+[//] : # [TBD/TODO]
-
+[//] : #
-1. Log in to your Yahoo Mail account.
+[//] : # ### Yahoo: @yahoo.com, @myyahoo.com, @ymail.com, @yahoo.*
-2. Click the gear icon in the upper-right corner and select "More Settings".
+[//] : #
-3. In the left-hand menu, click on "Mailboxes".
+[//] : # 1. Log in to your Yahoo Mail account.
-4. Under the "Mailbox list," select your primary Yahoo mailbox account.
+[//] : # 2. Click the gear icon in the upper-right corner and select "More Settings".
-5. Scroll down to the "Forwarding" section and enter the email address where you want your messages to be forwarded.
+[//] : # 3. In the left-hand menu, click on "Mailboxes".
-6. Click "Verify." Yahoo will send a verification email to the address you entered.
+[//] : # 4. Under the "Mailbox list," select your primary Yahoo mailbox account.
-7. Log in to the destination email account, open the verification email from Yahoo, and click the verification link to confirm ownership.
+[//] : # 5. Scroll down to the "Forwarding" section and enter the email address where you want your messages to be forwarded.
-8. Return to your Yahoo Mail settings, enable forwarding, select the verified address, and click "Save" to activate the feature.
+[//] : # 6. Click "Verify." Yahoo will send a verification email to the address you entered.
-
+[//] : # 7. Log in to the destination email account, open the verification email from Yahoo, and click the verification link to confirm ownership.
-[Enable automatic email forwarding in New Yahoo Mail : `https://help.yahoo.com/kb/SLN36684.html`](https://help.yahoo.com/kb/SLN36684.html)
+[//] : # 8. Return to your Yahoo Mail settings, enable forwarding, select the verified address, and click "Save" to activate the feature.
-
+[//] : #
-[Enable automatic email forwarding in Yahoo Mail : `https://help.yahoo.com/kb/auto-forwarding-address-sln29133.html`](https://help.yahoo.com/kb/auto-forwarding-address-sln29133.html)
+[//] : # [Enable automatic email forwarding in New Yahoo Mail : `https://help.yahoo.com/kb/SLN36684.html`](https://help.yahoo.com/kb/SLN36684.html)
-
+[//] : #
-### Microsoft: @outlook.com, @hotmail.com, @live.com, @msn.com
+[//] : # [Enable automatic email forwarding in Yahoo Mail : `https://help.yahoo.com/kb/auto-forwarding-address-sln29133.html`](https://help.yahoo.com/kb/auto-forwarding-address-sln29133.html)
-
+[//] : #
-[TBD/TODO]
+[//] : # ### Microsoft: @outlook.com, @hotmail.com, @live.com, @msn.com
+[//] : #
+[//] : # [TBD/TODO]