Touching up the mobile article.

content05-email.md

@@ -46,26 +46,28 @@ Proton provides an explanation with easy to follow instructions when migrating f
 [Switching : `proton.me/easyswitch`](https://proton.me/easyswitch)
 
 [//]: # Does all this stuff below really need to be in this zine??? Seems way too thorough.
-[//] : #
-[//] : # ### Google: @gmail.com
-[//] : #
-[//] : # [TBD/TODO]
-[//] : #
-[//] : # ### Yahoo: @yahoo.com, @myyahoo.com, @ymail.com, @yahoo.*
-[//] : #
-[//] : # 1. Log in to your Yahoo Mail account.
-[//] : # 2. Click the gear icon in the upper-right corner and select "More Settings".
-[//] : # 3. In the left-hand menu, click on "Mailboxes".
-[//] : # 4. Under the "Mailbox list," select your primary Yahoo mailbox account.
-[//] : # 5. Scroll down to the "Forwarding" section and enter the email address where you want your messages to be forwarded.
-[//] : # 6. Click "Verify." Yahoo will send a verification email to the address you entered.
-[//] : # 7. Log in to the destination email account, open the verification email from Yahoo, and click the verification link to confirm ownership.
-[//] : # 8. Return to your Yahoo Mail settings, enable forwarding, select the verified address, and click "Save" to activate the feature.
-[//] : #
-[//] : # [Enable automatic email forwarding in New Yahoo Mail : `https://help.yahoo.com/kb/SLN36684.html`](https://help.yahoo.com/kb/SLN36684.html)
-[//] : #
-[//] : # [Enable automatic email forwarding in Yahoo Mail : `https://help.yahoo.com/kb/auto-forwarding-address-sln29133.html`](https://help.yahoo.com/kb/auto-forwarding-address-sln29133.html)
-[//] : #
-[//] : # ### Microsoft: @outlook.com, @hotmail.com, @live.com, @msn.com
-[//] : #
-[//] : # [TBD/TODO]
+
+<!--
+### Google: @gmail.com
+
+[TBD/TODO]
+
+### Yahoo: @yahoo.com, @myyahoo.com, @ymail.com, @yahoo.*
+
+1. Log in to your Yahoo Mail account.
+2. Click the gear icon in the upper-right corner and select "More Settings".
+3. In the left-hand menu, click on "Mailboxes".
+4. Under the "Mailbox list," select your primary Yahoo mailbox account.
+5. Scroll down to the "Forwarding" section and enter the email address where you want your messages to be forwarded.
+6. Click "Verify." Yahoo will send a verification email to the address you entered.
+7. Log in to the destination email account, open the verification email from Yahoo, and click the verification link to confirm ownership.
+8. Return to your Yahoo Mail settings, enable forwarding, select the verified address, and click "Save" to activate the feature.
+
+[Enable automatic email forwarding in New Yahoo Mail : `https://help.yahoo.com/kb/SLN36684.html`](https://help.yahoo.com/kb/SLN36684.html)
+
+[Enable automatic email forwarding in Yahoo Mail : `https://help.yahoo.com/kb/auto-forwarding-address-sln29133.html`](https://help.yahoo.com/kb/auto-forwarding-address-sln29133.html)
+
+### Microsoft: @outlook.com, @hotmail.com, @live.com, @msn.com
+
+[TBD/TODO]
+-->

content10-mobile.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
 `Android` is the only mobile environment covered here. `iOS` is complicit in data harvesting and cannot be liberated. Some may argue that it's secure, and that may be true, but it is most definitely not private.
 
-There are also `Linux` phones out there, such as the `Pinephone` and `Librem 5`, but they will not be covered in this document. Below are their respective websites if they are of interest to you.
+There are also `Linux` phones out there, such as the `Pinephone` and `Librem 5`, but they will not be covered in this document. Below are their respective websites if they sound of interest to you.
 
 [`pine64.org/devices/pinephone/`](https://pine64.org/devices/pinephone/)
 
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ There are also `Linux` phones out there, such as the `Pinephone` and `Librem 5`,
 
 To have a private and secure mobile experience it will require a degoogled ROM.
 
-Degoogling a phone has two steps and ***cannot*** be done without wiping the device, so be sure to make a backup.
+Degoogling a phone has two steps and ***cannot*** be done without wiping the device, so be sure to save your data first or do it as soon as you purchase the device.
 
 1. Install a custom ROM (operating system).
   - At this point you may choose to root the device or not by flashing `Magisk`.