diff --git a/content/posts/blog/my-people.md b/content/posts/blog/my-people.md
index 3db1f32..34c1943 100644
--- a/content/posts/blog/my-people.md
+++ b/content/posts/blog/my-people.md
@@ -4,7 +4,8 @@ pinned: true
 title: "My People"
 subtitle: "Searching for Community"
 author: Bug
-#date: "2025-11-17T07:30:00-07:00"
+# Idea: date: "2025-11-17T07:30:00-07:00"
+# Started: date: "2025-11-17T13:30:00-07:00"
 date: "2025-11-17T13:30:00-07:00"
 toc: true
 images:
@@ -24,6 +25,7 @@ series:
   - spirituality
 categories:
   - musings
+  - pinned
 aliases:
   - /my-people
   - /pinned/my-people
@@ -31,7 +33,7 @@ aliases:
 
 **Table of Desired Traits**
 
-`A few of the characteristics which a spiritual entity would demonstrate.`
+`A few of the characteristics that each individual would demonstrate.`
 
 | Chakra | Trait | Liberation | Explanation |
 | :-: | :--: | :-----: | :------------- |
@@ -59,7 +61,7 @@ Gardens, orchards, [TBD: berry patches], and all sorts of ways to grow our own f
 
 Community kitchens, sweat lodges, group activities such as hikes, drum circles, and stargazing. A rotating schedule of checking in on community members to see if they could use a hand in any projects or personal [TBD: problems? emotions? healing? dilemmas?]. [TBD]
 
-All of this in a respectuful, voluntary, non-culty way which also respects people's desire for solitude from time to time. Obligatory events would mean coercion. Oppression and violence would have no place in such a group.
+All of this in a respectuful, voluntary, non-culty way which also respects people's desire to take solitude from time to time. Obligatory events would mean coercion, oppression, and violence which have no place in such a group.
 
 ## The Problems