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 				<p>	
 					My hobbies go further than just coding and video making. I am big into 
 					health and believe it is humanity's most important asset. I was fortunate 
-					to have time off school/work/hobbies in my early 20's was able to lock 
-					in a great lifestyle after a life of chronic sickness. See more below in 
-					<a href="#health">My Health Protocol</a>, 
-					it also includes a link to the full history.
+					to have time off school/work/hobbies in my early 20's and was able to 
+					lock in a great lifestyle after a life of chronic sickness. See more 
+					below in <a href="#health">My Health Protocol</a>. 
+					It also includes a link to my full history of changes.
 				</p>
 				<p>	
 					I am also an avid gardener, focusing on the principles of nature-based